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I like the horse, adds originality to the picture and a more storylike feeling to it, it's not only just a pretty girl, it's a pretty girl with a horse
I love the background here; its colors and simplicity really make the figure pop. I really don't like how some of the background seems to go over the woman though; to me it's a bit awkward. Color scheme is great. The hair is done very well here, a good mix of lights and darks and very detailed. Her face is also nicely shaded. The papers are nice, though I'm not sure what the lines on them are supposed to be. I adore the gold pieces (they are very well shaded and have nice details) but I wish you had put in a bit more shadow on the red (gem?) in her hair. The shine on the gold piece is nice (with the little star-shaped glimmer). Her clothing has decent shading, but it could be better (not by much, but by a little). I like the idea of a horse, and the bit that you added is shaded phenomenally, but again I feel like you cut it off at a very awkward place; showing up to the eye would have been better. Still a very pretty piece.
Ratings:
Vision: 5/5
Originality: 4.5/5
Technique: 4.5/5
Impact: 4/5